Persuasive Writing

The Intermediate School Day Should Finish At 5pm

School, a place where kids come to learn.  For intermediate students it is normally  8:35 in the morning till 3:00 in the afternoon.  The  intermediate school day should be changed  finish at 5:00pm.

If intermediate finished at 5pm you would have lots more time in each period For example if you were learning algebra in maths you cover most of the subject because you would of had a lot more time for it and you can tackle all the tough questions and problems.That means you would be smarter.  Your grades would be a lot higher because you would have learnt a lot more.  

Another good reason is because you wouldn't have so much time on video games. That is good because of course everyone knows that they all ruin your little minds.  Those video games involve punching and kicking what if kids brought all that to school, they would get in fights and it would give schools bad looks.

Did you ever think about what would happen on later on in life? Of course they would succeed because they would be smarter which means they would get better and more money earning jobs.  They would be better at things that now our days adults wouldn't even know.

What a time saver for teachers there would be no homework.  One reason why there would be no homework is because you would have done it all through the day.  Which is great for all those teacher around the world because they wouldn’t have to take all their time after school to set out homework.  

That is why it is a great idea to stretch out when school finishes to 5:00 in the evening.  Learning more, no as much time on video games,  succeed later on in life and NO HOMEWORK.  Those are all great reasons to stretch the school day.